Assignment for Wednesday February 25

googleRead: Nicholas Carr, “Is Google Making Us Stupid?
Jamais Cascio, “Get Smarter
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Write answers to discussion questions in the comments below

Who do you agree with, Carr or Cascio? Why? What arguments influenced you most?

These essays were both written five years ago or more. What’s changed since then? What would you add to their arguments?

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Assignment for Wednesday February 25 — 33 Comments

  1. After reading both articles, I ultimately sided with Carr. I could relate the feelings he expressed about of his mind being subconsciously manipulated. As being someone who has seen technology progress over the years, I am quite aware of how things have changed. With Google at a touch of a button, none of my questions go unanswered. I know that as technology has evolved I have adapted along with it. However, as much as I appreciate the gratification of knowing an answer almost instantly I dislike the fact that my contemplation is immediately ceased. Before Google I would think about things critically and would seek answers from friends and family. This would usually spark a valuable conversation, often leaving both of us feeling satisfied. Besides this, I strongly agreed that our concentration has been significantly affected by using technology. We live in a world of distractions. As I read this article I became more and more aware of how many times I was distracted. I had at least five things pulling my attention away from the reading. This made me figure that our demand for shorter texts is due to our inability to shut out the distractions of society. If Carr had written this article today i feel he would put much more emphasis on cellphones, and the significant role they have played with our socialization abilities. In Cascio’s case, I understood many of his points regarding the benefits of technology. However I felt Cascio only spoke from a scholarly perspective, and failed to address the daily use of technology by the average citizen. Technology’s impact on scholarly endeavors and societal communication and education are two very different things. He may have not approached this topic since this was published five-years-ago. I acknowledge that even within five years social media, world communications and education has changed significantly. Nonetheless, by not addressing both, I was left wanting more and thus didn’t feel completely convinced.

  2. Although both Carr and Cascio pose very interesting points that made me thinking of this ever-rapidly changing technology that surrounds us everyday, I believe that Cascio made a more convincing point. Carr addresses the issues that come along with being so accustomed to the use of technology. Carr believes that by using the internet, we are becoming less intellectual as we begin to rely a lot more on the Net. However, Carr refers to much of the internet’s uses in a very negative light and rarely touches on the positive side of the internet. One of the main arguments that drew me towards Cascio is the fact that he is able to realistically analyze the technology that is shaping our world. Cascio draws the point across that in reality, there is no turning back from where technology has taken us. As such, it is our responsibility to use that technology which is given unto us and continue to foster it in order to foster a “better” society. He is able to tackle many of the counter arguments such as the take-over by AI’s by saying that with the development of technology, comes the development of the human mind. As technology advances, becomes more productive and smarter, Cascio argues, our society will inevitably follow.

  3. Both Carr and Cascio have very good arguments in regards to the impact technology has made on our brains and how we think. I found myself agreeing with Carr right away because the experiences he was describing match the experiences I have had. I have noticed that my reading comprehension has gotten worse over the years and that it is harder for me to pay attention when I read as well. The Internet has allowed me to find out information in literally a minute or less, whereas before I would have to read a book or textbook in order to find out the information I needed. I really found relevance in the study report from Britain explaining, how there is “indeed there are signs that new forms of ‘reading’ are emerging as users ‘power browse’ horizontally through titles, contents pages and abstracts going for quick wins” (Carr). I find myself constantly skimming for information because I do not have the attention span to read the entire page. I did not even notice Carr’s article was 7 years old, for what he explained in his article seems to be identical to what I feel in 2015.

    Cascio’s argument also made sense to me, but I feel like his solution is one that will take time. I understand how humans have adapted over time whether it be natural disasters, diseases, etc.; however, adaptation takes time. I grew up being taught to read books thoroughly and am still told to in college. Therefore, it is difficult to “get smarter” when I am having to function the way humans have been for the past few centuries. Cascio does bring up a good point that “the information sea isn’t going to dry up” and that “strengthening our fluid intelligence is the only viable approach to navigating the age of constant connectivity.” The fact that 6 years has passed since Cascio wrote his article shows me that this is still a relevant problem, if not more relevant.

  4. I feel that both Cascio and Carr bring up thought-provoking points about human relationships with technology. They both take into account the fact that the expanse of technology, the prevalence that the internet has in our everyday lives, shape the way we process information and go about our daily routines. Carr’s argument resonated with me more than Cascio’s because I found it more relatable. I have experienced the feeling of having a diminishing attention span due to the constant stimulation provided by media. The internet is home to pretty much anything I could wish to seek out and more. It empowers me immensely, as Cascio brings to light, but it has conditioned my mind to behave differently. I interact with online text in a way that in unique to my interaction with printed text. There are pop-ups, ads, and not to mention the possibility of pulling up a new tab and searching absolutely anything else in the world, which distracts me from committing my full attention to whatever I am reading online. I have become accustomed to focusing on efficiency more than quality understanding and this translates over into my approach with reading books. I find my mind wandering and seeking further stimulation very rapidly upon opening the text.

    The fact that years have passed since these articles were written, yet they are still relevant as ever, emphasizes that the content mentioned is a very real and significant aspect of modern society. I fear that as time goes on, the virtual world will continue to swallow up the existence and/or value of print resources. I feel that Cascio and Carr will develop stronger standpoints as time progresses because the severity of what they are talking about is increasing.

  5. After reading both articles by Nicholas Carr and Jamais Cascio, I felt that both writers are effective in bringing out their perspectives. However, I agree and was influenced most by Nicholas Carr’s piece. Carr uses good quotations, examples from different sources(movies etc) and includes a specific study that backs his point of view even more.
    Jamais Cascio uses ethos more than Carr. Cascio is very successful in addressing his message: our intelligence is the key for our and our future generation’s welfare. He uses good examples as well, that backup his claims for e.g. Mount Toba incident.
    Nicholas Carr’s evocative article is the one I relate to immediately, faster than I do with Cascio’s because his style of writing is easy, flows smoothly, and is interesting. Nicholas Carr uses more pathos that helps me connect with his point, and enables me to be influenced with his writing as he points out things such as, “I get fidgety, lose the thread, begin looking for something else to do. I feel as if I’m always dragging my wayward brain back to the text.” These are the exactly the same thoughts running through my mind every time I am forced to read a long book/article. It is much easier for me if there is something to read on the internet, or search for something online. Technology has made me think this way. Moreover, I have been getting the feeling that reading is becoming harder for me, and Nicholas Carr’s piece just makes me think that I am not the only one feeling this way.
    The fact that these articles were written more than 5years ago just enables me to relate with them more. Even though they were written so long ago, it is amazing how the world is moving in the same direction, so much so that their articles are valid and useful even today. The issue addressed by Carr: reading is tough, technology is making it simpler for us, is becoming increasingly true for our world today. To his article, I would just add a bit more emphasis to the part where he explains how reading works in human being’s minds and brains. This would make the readers understand his point more in the mordern day. Moreover, for Cascio’s article, it is almost as difficult to relate to today, as it was 5 years ago. For me, he needs to use more pathos and less logos and ethos as the reader should be able to connect with what he is trying to convey. However, Cascio’s overall message to the readers is very effective, making readers think immensely. As a result, I would not change much in his writing as such.

  6. I think that Carr makes such a good point when it comes to the fact that you loose concentration and your mind wanders more easily these days. I really recognise myself in that statement. I remember as well that I used to love to read and I read so much growing up, but now I can not remember the last time I finished a book. Very sad to say, but nowadays I do not prioritise them the way I should. And I really do miss getting caught up in a good book, maybe laying out in my backyard during a summer day.
    As for Cascio, maybe we do evolve and with that, find new ways of reading a book, instead of holding an actual book. We are indeed getting smarter, at least I like to think so. But maybe we have to make sacrifices to achieve that. On the cost of getting smarter, we pay the price of losing our concentration. Because we arena so used to not having to look for so long before finding all the information we need.
    Overall, I agree with Carr. Because I do miss my books and the way I could read a whole book series in a weekend. As he says, it really is a different kind of reading today, both with different purposes and with new techniques. Today I feel that we read more to find things out then to actually enjoy the practise of reading.
    I believe since these articles were written, the trend of reading things online and not in an actual book have increased. And with that we see so many benefits, its often cheeper, more accessible and takes up less space. But how often do we actually finish that pdf-file that we downloaded before forgetting about it and moving on? At least a real book can stand on a bookshelf and stare at us until we finish it.

  7. Both Carr and Cascio take pretty extreme sides in the question of how humans relate to ever-advancing technology. After reading both arguments, I found Carr’s to be more convincing and more aligned with my opinions on the matter. Technology is not something to fear, but there is some merit in questioning where it is taking us. How has Google’s convenience, for example, affected how we process information? I know I am guilty of reverting to skimming and losing focus after a few paragraphs of reading something. I have grown so accustomed to quick answers that anything that requires too much scrolling seems like too much effort. Twitter’s limit of 140 characters is a perfect metaphor for how society now receives its information. In ways, this is definitely beneficial. I have learned so many little facts and tidbits of information through the Internet. And as Cascio points out, these advancements do empower our minds. But at the same time, is it devaluing our ability to learn? To analyze? To debate and discuss? It reminds me of Sparknotes—how students can read summaries or modern translations instead of reading a piece of difficult literature. While it may be sufficient enough to get a good grade on a reading quiz, this study habit allows so much to be missed by disregarding the detail, language, and imagery that comes with actually reading. In the same way, with the Internet, it’s easy to dispel the depth of information that comes after the first few results.

    It is interesting to me that these articles are as old as they are but are still very applicable. Five years ago, around the time that they were written, I had just made a Facebook, had no knowledge of iPhones, and barely used to Internet to the extent of its capacities. Since then, technology has only progressed. It would be interesting to hear the arguments of Carr and Cascio today, and how their positions on technology have changed over time.

  8. After reading both articles I have come to the conclusion that I side more with Carr. I agree with Carr that technology has created a distraction to the way that many live their daily life. When reading this article I felt that I could definitely relate when he brought up how there is a decline in a human’s ability to concentrate while completing simple tasks such as reading. I agree with this statement because there are many instances where I am reading and get easily distracted by the technological devices that surround me. I also agree that the advancement in technology has led many to become instantly gratified. When a person has a question, they are able to easily access the Internet to look up the answer. I agree with Carr that people no longer need the long- term concentration it used to take to problem solve because of the Internet enabling access to any answer instantly.
    Cascio did bring up some very good points in his article. Although I tend to side more with Carr, I do agree that the human race does keep evolving to constantly keep improving itself. One of the major downfalls to Cascio’s argument is that evolution is not instantaneous and needs time for it to occur. I do agree with Cascio that we must utilize technology to enhance performance and complete greater things.
    In my opinion, the fact that these articles were written 5 years ago does not make much of a difference to how one will view these articles. I find it interesting that one is able to read these articles and see that this argument can still be discussed. Knowing that Carr’s article was written 5 years ago I can say that human concentration has gotten even worse because of the rapid growth in technology.

  9. Call me old fashioned, but I think nothing can replace the feel of reading a hard copy of a book. I’m the kind of person who resents kindles and e-readers and is even a little upset at the fact that college books cost so much money, as I would much rather spend my money on a hard copy of a book than to pay for an online access code. But Carr brings up some good points. In his article, he mentions that blogger Bruce Friedman claims that he has lost the ability to read and absorb a longish online article. Though I absolutely love reading, I have found that over the years, in my academic career, reading online articles and assigned texts has just become extremely difficult. My attention to these assignments have become fleeting. Ironically enough, Carr’s essay itself was extremely daunting because I thought my scroll bar would never reach the bottom of the page. But for me, I don’t attribute this difficulty in reading to the immediacy of the online world, or the accessibility of search engines like google to supply instant gratification. For me personally, this is due to the fact that my eyes are always reading something and it has caused them to tire easily. I recently had an eye exam and my eye doctor told me that our eyes are just not accustomed to reading and looking at screens for a long period of time. But my generation is always glued to their phones, their computers, their T.V., and at our age, reading books, assignments, and texts. Could our inability to sit and read for a long period of time, whether online or with a hard copy of book, simply be due to the fact that our eyes are just not prepared for so much reading? Compared to, say, my mom or dad’s generation, I think my generation has their eyes glued and reading something throughout the day more than any other generation before us. However, Cascio’s argument is very true as well. Honestly, without google, there are some things I would have risked going my whole life without knowing. The opportunity cost of visiting the library every time I have a question that I don’t know the answer to is just too great. No one has time for that. A regular person like me can research recent advances in the medical field, or discoveries in space, and all without having to spend days at the library tracking down texts. The only thing I wished to hear more about, from both articles but especially Carr, is a bit about how people are very specifically affected (in a physical sense) by spending so much time on a computer.

  10. After reading both Carr and Cascio’s articles I agreed with Carr more than I did with Cascio. Carr makes some excellent points about how our minds are always wandering when we are reading something for long periods of time and that “The deep reading that used to come naturally has become a struggle”(Carr). Deep reading has definitely become a struggle especially when reading books or articles online. Just as I was reading these two articles I found myself getting tired of them and getting the urge to check my phone. I was unable to just sit down and read the two articles straight through without fidgeting. Carr points out that there are many advantages and disadvantages of having the ability to look up everything on Google. It is nice to be able to look up the answer to something in only a couple of seconds but then after we find the answer we stop looking. By doing this, we do not absorb everything and are unable to read more in depth. In this sense Google is making us stupid but also lazy because we are unable to sit for a long period of time and read something. It is true that a lot of the time when I am on Google, my mind is a “swiftly moving stream of particles” where information goes in one ear and comes out the other. On the other hand, Cascio does make a few convincing points in his argument that more technology is actually making us smarter. For example, he mentions that we have so much information at our fingertips and this allows us to “make connections and see patterns” (Cascio). I think this is important when it comes to understanding the world around us. Lastly, I appreciate that he acknowledges the fact that so much technology can be a problem and can cause “technology-induced ADD” (Cascio).
    Since these articles were written five years ago I think things have changed in the way that technology has progressed and advanced in the last five years. However, the urge to look up things on Google is still there and I think it has become worse. Today there are so many more books that are becoming digitized and with Iphones people have the ability to look up things on their phones. It is rare when I see someone look up something in a dictionary. Therefore, the only thing I would add to Cascio and Carr’s arguments would be to mention the influence of phones and texting as well as social media.

  11. For this topic in particular neither writer needed to convince me. I have, for the most part, always thought that the Internet has given us an easy way out. I have nothing against our generation, but it is a fact that many of us have much shorter attention spans than older generations. I also see people my age, me included, having difficulty reading for long periods of time. I agree with Carr mostly because I share the same view as him, but the content of his writing is also very intriguing for me and brings up valid points that sway the argument in his favor.
    In the article “power browsing” was introduced. I myself find myself not actually reading articles or posts to the full extent that I could. This may be because it is online and my nature I am more accustom to reading and actual book that is in front of me instead of a computer screen that has many tabs open for all kinds of cites. An interesting statement Carr made was, “ It almost seems that they go online to avoid reading in the traditional sense.” (Carr) I would agree with this statement because it is true that most of us don’t go on the Internet to read like we would for a class. We go online for something quick and easy, therefor “power browsing.”
    In my opinion, over time things have progressively become simpler and simpler. Taking less time and less effort to do, the Internet is literally toddler friendly. I think that in the past five years apps like Seri have been invented, thus allowing information to be even more at ones fingertips.

  12. Although both authors made compelling arguments, I sided with Carr more on the subject as I relate to his findings a lot more, and it influenced me the most because of how close-to-home some of his points were. Like Carr, I too have found that it takes more effort for me to stay concentrated in comparison to when I was younger. Just by reading his article I’d catch myself drifting off thinking about something else, or quickly searching for something on Google. I find myself constantly double tasking when I shouldn’t, and the presence of technology and media has made me less inclined to savor the precious small moments as everything is immediate and convenient. For example, when I was younger I use to read so much more than I do now, partially because I didn’t have the work load I have now, but also because this was a time before I was proficient in technology and had to rely on entertainment the old fashioned way, through books. But now, instead of quickly reading through books and enjoying them like I use to, I now have to take breaks because of either boredom or I feel my attention slipping. I feel my constant exposure to media has not only shorted my attention span, but it also has dulled my experiences, whether it’s from books or just by learning new information. When I read something for too long, I become bored of the information, no matter how compelling I may have found it 15 minutes ago. Perhaps this occurs because of the laziness I have procured from being use to instantaneous information at my fingertips. This is perhaps one of the saddest things I’ve found through my time with technology, as at times, I become numb to enjoyable and delightful experiences.

    These articles are still relevant in this society, as technology has increasingly become more prevalent in our lives. What’s changed from five years ago is that this technology is now even more prominent this society as it is constantly updating. In a way, technology has infiltrated our lives, and this modern society would essentially be lost without it. As time passes, these articles will become more relevant as their points and ideas will be proven though time. What I would add to the articles would be how the latest modern technology has affected our society, because with each new technological invention or upgrade comes at a cost of something else, and it would be interesting to explore how society is affect by that.

  13. Both Carr and Cascio make arguments that are very real and relatable in modern society, and make us double think about our own experience and the pro’s and con’s of this digital age. Although i agree with Carr’s argument about not being able to concentrate and the declining attention span, i don’t agree with his argument about the internet changing our mental capabilities or intelligence. Carr also makes an interesting point when he uses examples of other technologies and how they have changed society, i especially like the example of the clock and how it has changed un by: “Deciding when to eat, to work, to sleep, to rise, we stopped listening to our senses and started obeying the clock”(Carr). This explanation really a thought provoker and made me feel uneasy. On the other hand, i felt like Cascio’s article was an excellent argument piece, i let like he really used the counter arguments to help his position seem more correct. Just as in Carr’s article there rare some points that I do not agree with completely, but overall I understood with the point brought up. I feel kind of stuck in between both articles and don’t think I fair one or the other because they both contain arguments I agree and disagree with, but overall I feel like Cascio’s piece was more complete and well written.

  14. After reading both articles, I sided with Carr. They both have very good arguments, and very opposite arguments. I could definitely relate with most of the things Carr said. Now that I have the internet, I find my attention span getting smaller and my brain is changing by the way I learn, which is online. The way I learn is by researching and finding information by myself. With all information at my fingertips, I don’t have to do anything to learn, so the information doesn’t stick in my mind. I think that is one of the reasons I agree with Carr that google makes us stupid. By reading a book, the info sticks in my mind and I remember what i read more than what I read online. Cascio said we were smarter by having technology. However, I think its the technology that has gotten smarter, not me. I think since the articles were written, technology has definitely advanced. The main technology that is commonly used has changed as well. I still think Carr was on the right track, even today.

  15. Even though I agreed with both Carr and Cascio in some respect, I thought Carr had stronger arguments. Carr argues that we now have a need for efficiency and immediacy which is weakening our capacity for deep reading. At first I disagreed because I do enjoy reading books and also articles that I am very interested in. After reading Cascio’s article, however, changed my mind. It was discovered that the article was three pages long and each page seemed like it took hours to read. I felt as though he rambled on and some parts were not even related to the main topic. I wanted him to jump right into the point – he was not very efficient. By the second page, I became anxious since it was becoming tedious to read.
    Secondly, Carr argues that writing with pen and paper is different from writing on the computer. I have discovered this to be true as well, since my writing on the computer dramatically differs from the style of writing by hand. By hand, I think less and is able to scribble away, but on the computer I always find myself stopping and rereading everything I write. What he fails to mention is how people read articles differently on the computer as they would do on print because I know I read things more carefully and faster when it is printed out for me. I don’t think much has changed in the past five years regarding their essays. Cascio’s point of how Twitter can figure out what we like and not like to see on our feed is important because then they can make our experience more pleasurable. This is true, like BuzzFeed, Pinterest and other sites allows you to choose topics that you are interested in to make sure articles in those genres will make it onto your feed. Efficiency and wanting immediacy is not necessarily a bad thing.

  16. After reading the two articles, I cannot say that I completely agree with one or the other. If anything, I might agree more with Cascio, but they both bring up persuasive points throughout their respective articles. For instance, I remember reading series of books in short periods of time when I was a kid. But as Carr said, when I read books nowadays, I find it harder to focus. For some reason, my mind seems to be more prone to small distractions than the novel I am trying to read. As Carr also says, reading is not something that is instinctive for humans. But although I have learned how to read, sometimes I feel as if I have lost it. On the other hand, I love what Cascio said about fluid intelligence. Cascio defines fluid intelligence as the “ability to find meaning in confusion and to solve new problems, independent of acquired knowledge.” As Professor Perez said in class, we cannot just revert back to our old technological ways. Sure, many of us may not like technology or social networking- but we can’t change it. The only productive thing we can do at this point is to accept where we are and to make the most of it. I feel as if many of us are constantly looking at the negative effects of the internet and trying to create problems that aren’t there. What I took away from Cascio’s article is that we cannot let something like Google or the internet in general have too much of an effect on who we are as people. We need to look for and find solutions instead of fixating on problems. In conclusion, I would say that Cascio’s article influenced me the most.
    Although I know much has changed since 2010, if I am being perfectly honest, it feels as if almost nothing has changed. The only things I can think of off the top of my head are that Facebook was still popular and no one had really heard of Instagram yet in 2010. I think this may be because the five year period before 2010, I was a part of the generation that was just being introduced to all this new technology- the IPhone, the Ipad, GoPros, etc. But since then, it has just been newer versions of old products. Although there have been incredible technological achievements in the last five years, nothing will compare to the excitement of the introduction of the first new products. If I had to add something to the arguments, I would say something about how it seems that over the last couple of years, we have these amazing products, yet still seem to never be satisfied by them.

  17. Though both excerpts did make sense, I found myself mainly agreeing with Carr. He validly points out how we use the internet for everything and once we find it the answer can seem utterly insignificant. The internr has taken the fun our of finding answers because its too casual. Carr also explains how our attention spans have shortened and as much as I hate to admitt it, once I was given the privelege of using a computer my attention span shot down.

    In the past 5 years the internet has definitely progress and has Even tried to enhance the literary expeeince by adding literature and books on the technology. Though these improvements may be helpful they still cannot replace the genuineness of reading a paper filled book.

  18. I found myself siding with Cascio in his belief that the human race possesses the capabilities of getting smarter. It makes sense to me that adaptation is a major part of our soecies, which is best exemplified through Cascio’s caveman example. Man has had to adapt with the times, which is a good thing because it influences transformation. Transformation signifies a growth has taken place and today’s society is shaped around that very idea, that we should always be getting better. Carr presents his idea that the internet is in a sense making people more stupid. He introduces his idea that the people using the internet are having more trouble staying focused and when long pieces of text are put in fromt of them, they will choose to skim. I do agree that the internet inspires shortcuts, where people look for ways to get to the answer more quickly without reading in depth. But, i believe that these shortcuts are the way we have adapted to the technology that has become a major part of our lives. Carr suggests that we are thinking differently and i believe that we are, but as a result of adapting to the environment. Considering both of these were written 5 years ago, shouldn’t we not be able to concentrate at all? Technology has become way more involved with everyday people than it was 5 years ago, so if Carr’s beliefs are true, reading and writing this paragraph wouldn’t be possible at all. If it was up to Carr, i wouldn’t be able to focus long enough to write a couple sentences for this assignment. Cascio i believe provides a better all around judgment of technology’s effects on people than Carr, but both do bring valid points concerning the transformation of the internet’s use.

  19. In Cascio’s article “Get Smarter,” he talks about the benefits of knowing a little bit about everything. He claims that “fluid intelligence” will allow us to make more connections when we know a little bit of everything. I disagree with his argument because I think we’ll lose the ability to make connections in the first place if we’re always relying on the internet for quick answers. I agree with Carr in that we’ll turn into pancakes, knowing a little about everything but nothing about anything. The Internet hasn’t turned me into someone who skims through material to find a short quick answer, as Carr claims is happening to most people. I still read every word of every sentence in fear that if I skim I’ll miss an important detail that could affect my understanding of the topic. However, it takes me an extremely long time to read something in its entirety; not because I am a slow reader but because I have a very short attention span. So in this case I do agree with Carr, in that the internet has drastically decreased my attention span. I liked his example of getting pop ups alerting someone of a new email. It’s something that happens to me all the time and I agree that things like that are what lead to a decreased attention span. In fact, while I was reading the articles I had to take a total of three breaks because I couldn’t get myself to sit there and grind through it.
    I think if these articles were to be written again in the present day, they would include the impact of Siri. The use of Siri has become way more common over the last few years. In fact it has become an aspect of many people’s every day lives. It’s made Google searches even easier than they already were and it provides a quick answer to almost any question. I think Cascio would be a supporter of Siri and appreciate the fact that it’s one step closer to artificial intelligence. However, I think Carr would argue that it’s only perpetuating our lazy tendencies for a quick answer and hurting us in the long run, which is the argument I would agree with.

  20. Due to the fact that I was able to easily relate to Carr’s argument, I agree more with him. The most essential and compelling arguments in his piece included the fact that the internet is manipulating how our brain works. I found his example of our attention span for reading books quite compelling and also relatable, which not only increased the validity of his argument, but also increased his credibility as a writer. On thing that I slightly disagree with Carr on however is his questioning of the simple notion that “we’d all be better off if our brains were supplemented by artificial intelligence”. I think we could be. This is because AI would allow us humans to focus our thoughts on the things that are most critical and important to us, thus leaving the more mundane cognitive tasks to AI. I agree with Carr on big data being not only powerful, but also becoming more precise, however I think that this case has become even more a reality since he published this article (especially in the marketing world). One point that I found lacking from his writings was how the use of consumer absorption technologies (such as Google) may limit creativity and individual thinking. I have personally found this to be the case.

    If writing this argument in the present day, I would add a lot more information and even specific statistics surround the topic of big data. I would also differentiate and compare mobile technology use (specifically phones and their impacts on the brain and cognition) and more standard computer use in order to learn about the positive and negative effects that each have on humans.

  21. Deciding who to side with, either Cascio or Carr is hard for me because both of their articles hold ideas that I agree with. Cascio argues that the internet and advancement of technology overall will allow us to become more intelligent which I can see happening but not in a deep level. There is only so much you can understand with a quick internet search. His idea can be connected to the old saying “Jack of all trades, master of none” in the sense that we wouldn’t really have a true understanding of things we search up. It is true that we can get the information fast whenever we want but in order to connect that information to other things and analyze, we can’t really do that because our understanding of it is not deep enough. For example, I find that in STEM courses like physics and math, it is easy to solve problems were just the components of the equations are given to you. Anyone can follow steps and solve those types of problems. In order to study for tests in those courses though, we must work through a number of different problems containing different scenarios that come form the real world. New problems are always rising and we must know how to work through them using the information we have. I don’t believe that their will be a day when the internet holds all the answers to all of our problems so we must keep practicing our work to get to a solution. What I want to get across is the fact that for me, it is important to use the internet to learn about various things but don’t let it be an excuse to not exercise and grow our problem solving skills. In this sense, I agree with both authors. In cases were I have to read things that don’t have to do with my major, I become impatient and distracted if they are too long. For things not having to do with my major or that are not of a topic that interests me, I skim through the pages looking for a conclusion that holds just the important facts. In this sense, I don’t agree with Carr because it is just the case that when someone finds something interesting to give their attention to it and when they’re not, to look for distraction that keep them away form it. Five years ago, not everyone was so connected and dependent on technology as they are today. Although at the time they were, now it is even more so. Deciding wether it is right or wrong is hard because we haven’t been using technology for a long time. I wouldn’t change anything in Carr’s and Cascio’s articles because they hold different views than me. If I would, I would probably just rewrite their whole articles to mirror my thoughts and beliefs.

  22. Perhaps it was because the points Carr made in his article felt more relatable to my experience with technology and the internet, but Carr’s arguments influenced me much more than Cascio’s. Agreeing with Carr, I definitely find that my attention span has rapidly decreased. I think it’s particularly interesting that although there tends to be the perception that children have the shortest attention spans, as I have grown older I’ve found that my attention span is comparatively shorter to my childhood days. When reflecting on Carr’s arguments, I would definitely owe my reduced attention span to technology. Relying on speedy connections and training my mind to navigate through and ignore all the “hyperlinks, blinking ads, and other digital gewgaws” has made me lose the ability to even focus on a single article or page in front of me. Technology provides so many distractions that it’s no wonder that our minds are being affected; as Carr says, “our ability to interpret text, to make the rich mental connections that form when we read deeply and without distraction, remains largely disengaged.” No matter how intrigued I am by a topic or by a book or whatever content that has caught my attention, my mind inevitably starts to drift off and I instinctively open a new tab in my browser or check my phone. The convenience our devices provide and the gateway of information and entertainment that the internet draws us towards too often keep us from having the pure and meaningful experiences that our generation was able to have as children. Before we were introduced to iPhones and laptops and Netflix our childhood entertainment came from playdates and baby toys and silly games like hide and seek. Nowadays, it seems like everyone’s brains are so easily entertained by the mind-numbing television shows and video games that have been produced.

    Although both articles were written a few years ago, I don’t think a significant amount has changed since then. While there have been many updates and improvements to various Apple products and more complex devices have been introduced, the key turning point in technological advancements had already occurred. From that point on, everything seems to be feeding off the original revolutionary technology and spiraling into newer, more complex versions. The only counter argument I would bring up to Carr’s article is that not everything about the internet and technology should be looked at so negatively; the internet really does open up a wide range of knowledge and information available to us and inspires us to seek and learn more. I found it a little difficult to keep up with Cascio’s article because I wasn’t able to relate with many of the examples he was using. I found that he listed too many examples that I was unable to follow and understand the relevance of, despite the intriguing topic. Overall, while both articles make good arguments that I’m able to see both sides of, I definitely found myself taking Carr’s points into further consideration, as many of the arguments forced me to reflect on my daily habits and tendencies.

  23. Both Cascio and Carr seemed to have good arguments about technological advances. However, from a familiar stand point I would have to say I agree with Carr more. His article seems to have more weight in my life. I agree that when I read I lose attention faster than I used to. I often do find my self drifting and wanting to find other things to do. It is interesting that these other things that I find myself leaning towards are technologically things. For example, checking my Facebook and Instagram is always in the back of my head when I am reading. I subconsciously keep my phone by my side while I read and even check it when I know it hasn’t rung. I, to an extent, agree with the notion of pancake people. Definitely more in modern times people know a very broad amount of facts but none of these facts they know in depth. 5 years later I still feel like these comments about modern society and Google hold up to the truth. I would not change Carr’s argument. As far as Cascio’s argument, I think it is hard to say whether I’d like to change it or not. He has his own points and I don’t completely agree with them. However, I don’t necessarily think that time has proben his argument wrong. The only addition I could add would be more examples of more modern technology.

  24. I really liked both articles and thought they provided some very valid and interesting points about how technology has come to shape the way we interact with the world in the last decade. I found Cascio’s article to be more relatable, because I have seen it happen to me and to everyone else around me. I find myself with a shorter attention span, and though I have always loved to read, I get easily distracted now and really have to work at reading, something that I did not have to do before. With multitudes of information available at our fingertips, I think most of us “Google scholars” just know a little bit about a wide range of things. Which is not a bad thing, but the fact that everything is so instantaneous does not encourage people to take the time and learn something in-depth and with context, which is much more effective and conducive to long term learning. However, I do also agree with Carr because I thought his approach was more realistic. All of this technology is not going anywhere anytime soon, it is in fact just going to get more advanced and we have to learn to adapt. As much as I agree with the fact that technology has had some adverse affects, I am not willing to give any of it up, and there is no denying that it has made my life much easier. Technology has advanced greatly just in the last 5 years, and the world has become more connected and instantaneous, with a larger amounts of people and different generations using all kinds of technology- its not just something the “kids” are doing.

  25. I had a hard time decided who I agreed with overall. I think that in the end Carr’s arguments spoke the most to me, mostly because I can relate and see them in the real world. My ever-shortening attention span is one of my biggest obstacles in college. I find it extremely rare for myself to read an entire article all the way through. Skimming and reading summaries have become a new reality for me, and it is one that I am not proud or fond of. I come from the generation of instant gratification, where the process of understanding something has disappeared and simply Google searching for the immediate answer is a normal means of gaining knowledge. Cascio argues that you gain more knowledge because we have more access to information through our technological advancements. I definitely appreciate the fact that we have the ability to answer virtually any question through the click of a button. However, I have found that this is very surface level learning and I’m not sure that knowing a little about a lot of things is better than knowing a lot about a few things.

    Overall I really enjoyed both readings and didn’t find them to be terribly outdated. If I were to try to add some more modern aspects, I would talk about mobile technology and how that has affected society, especially socially.

  26. It’s interesting. As I was reading these articles, I became more and more aware of my desire to just quickly check Facebook and respond to my friend’s comment. I stayed focused until I had to look up the definition of “banal” and ended up finding synonyms on an online thesaurus and then searching some other random words to see what other synonyms could come up with. 30 seconds later, I was back at reading the article. That little break allow me to read six or so more paragraphs in the article before again, I was itching to look something else up. It may have just been that these articles spoke of our small span of attention online, but I felt very unfocused and unsettled completing this assignment. Carr’s argument holds true to me in this sense, my attention has seriously had some drawbacks increasingly in recent years. I enjoy Cascio’s article more, however. He does a very good job of analyzing what he believes our future with technology will be in a way that seems very plausible. He is able to very plausibly break down our relationship with technology and makes the point that humans are very good at adapting; perhaps technology is part of evolution to survive our coming struggles with the world. His description of “fluid resistance” resonates with me. As a child, I memorized my multiplication tables, the 50 states and their capitals, etc. While this was all useful knowledge, my skills of creative problem solving and ability to decipher mass amounts of information at a time has proved useful to me far more.
    Carr’s article was less than a decade ago, but when we talk about technology, that could just as well be a century. I wonder what he would say now with the ability for us to pull out cell phones even during a conversation as a distraction from a real person. His entire argument seems to still hold true in the present day, perhaps more so than that of Cascio. Cascio does an excellent job of giving a realistic reason for his hope for our future. But we cannot ignore that our future is just as grim now as it was six years ago. We still are faced with a serious shortage of resources and of a weakening global climate, and our technological advances are veering more to entertainment and consumer interest rather than bettering the world. Society has become too engrossed in itself to put all of its considerable power into fixing our world and surviving. The long term fix can always be found later right?

  27. After reading and seeing point perspectives from Carr and Cascio, I ultimately sided with Carr. To me, Cascio’s article was more interesting than Carr’s in the fact that he talks about the past, present, and a future potentially like the novel Brave New World. What I thought he did not stress enough was the regular everyday use of technology and the impact it has on humans. Since I have seen the way technology has evolved and the way it changed me, I could not agree more with Carr’s points. Before I regularly used Google for either school or personal use, I was an avid reader who could read around 300 words per minute and would comprehend what I was reading with ease. If I did not know what a word meant I would use a dictionary to find out the definition. Nowadays I would find the word with a click of a button on Google. If I try reading a book now, I find myself struggle to keep my attention and would often have to re-read a paragraph because my mind wandered elsewhere. The fact that this article was written 5 years ago further proves how much it still applies to society today. I think if Carr would’ve written this article in 2015, he would have a lot more things to say about social media and the cellphone.

  28. I agree more so with Carr, but then again Cascio makes some valid points. Google is ultimately making us less knowledgeable since we are able to find little bits and pieces of information available, but then again, its making things easier on us and not having that challenge that we would used to have for finding information would not let us retain what we learned. The whole point of finding things challenging will help us retain information since we are challenging our brain, hence why we read and write down notes is challenging ourselves to go through information so we can learn it since our brain is working hard to gain information. With information at our hand, we can temporarily retain the information, but we will not learn it so much since the information is right in front of us, telling it what it is. I’ve been told a lot of times for simple tasks of what to do or someone telling me what to do, but I won’t retain it for long since it’s just thrown to me, my brain is not being forced to learn the information, so it will stay for a bit, but I won’t retain it as if I were to try and learn something. The same thing applies with Google, I will learn a small fact from going on Google, but I will not retain it for long since it’s given to me, I’m not going out of my way like a book and reading to help retain the information. So with this sense, I agree with Carr, but Cascio makes a good counterargument. Maybe our brains are just not currently trained to do reading online. Our brain is reverting back into an infancy state with trying to use an online basis, but training our brain to do things online can help us master things like we did with regular books, since reading is not apart of our genes, it is a skill humans picked up. This article, although from five years ago, has not changed much to today’s technology since a lot of the same applications still apply today, but things I would add is the simplification of things such as Instagram and Snapchat. Other than that, things from five years ago have changed, but the applications are still the same thing.

  29. Both Carr’s article and Cascio’s article had noteworthy points that discussed the way technology has led to changes in society’s relationship with each other and attention spam. As I read through the two articles, I kept getting distracted, leaving the page in order to search up a word, to watch a YouTube video or two and to flip through my phone. Even now, as I write this blog post, my mind is wandering and refusing to stay focused on the task at hand. For these reasons and examples, I agree with Carr’s argument more than Cascio’s. Cascio believes that the advancements in technology and our increasing dependence on the Internet will allow us to eventually evolve into smarter humans. But in order to become truly smarter and more intelligent requires the one thing that we never seem willing to give up: time. Today, everyone relies on instant information and direct connections. Not many are willing to flip through heavy and think encyclopedias, dictionaries or textbooks when you can instantly find the same information online in 10 seconds or less. But in order to truly understand a topic, you can’t just skim through the surface of what the Internet provides for you. At the same time I can’t say I totally agree with Carr’s stance. His argument is only applicable in certain scenarios I believe. For example, when I have to write an essay or read a chapter in my textbook for an assignment, the chances of me getting distracted and procrastinating is much higher than if I were to be reading a fiction novel on my Kindle. Whatever I am doing has to be able to catch my attention and keep it. Even when I was younger, whenever I would start reading a fiction novel, I would become sucked into the story, the world that the author had created. My parents would have to call my name multiple times, sometimes even come up and poke me, in order to recapture my attention. Today is the same. If I start reading a novel, only a loud yell of my name or a gentle shove will be able to pull me out.
    In the five years that have passed since Carr’s and Cascio’s articles have been written, even more technological advances have been introduced to the public. If anything, Carr’s belief in the change in human cognition would only be reinforced by people’s obsession with their phones and social media today.

  30. At first, I thought I agreed with Carr’s argument that the advancement in technology has diluted our intelligence, and our state of mind has been altered permanently for the worse as a species. However, Cascio presented a point I truly carry a similar stance with in which humans are ever-evolving creatures in terms of our intelligence and the way we utilize tools and technology for the advancement of our survival and development. The point that truly captured my attention was Cascio’s comparison of how modern technology, the Net, and AI are all being scrutinized is similar to how Aristotle scrutinized writing, and how critics scrutinized printing; both turned out to be essential for the advancement of human development and mental intelligence. As a species, we “get smarter” as time progresses and as our mind develops. Thus, I believe that the deep reading state that is being diluted is simply part of the process of human’s mental development to a new stage in which this feature is unnecessary. The technology that we created has empowered as with the ability to cope with things through quicker means in which information and intelligence can be accessible throughout humans in general, not specialized experts. For instance, my transition into America has been quite a fast process; initially, it was admitted a massive overflow of information as I come to this new and foreign place that presents itself as a global center of intelligence and information. Hovever, after a short period of time, I easily adapted to this new mentality and flow of information, and my lifestyle has altered. That is the special feature that the homo sapiens of the Nooscene era possess, the ability to cope to changes much quicker than previous humans. Development must come with change, and to be able to change quickly allow for quicker development.
    Surprisingly, these two articles are quite aged, but the topics they present are still relevant today because in the era we thrive in, technology becomes outdated in just a matter of a year or months. 5 years, in terms of today’s technological timeframe, seem more like 50 years to the people of the 20th century. However, the people of today live a lifestyle based on technology, but we become masters of the ever-changing technology due to our ability to cope much faster than previous generations. This allow us to “get smarter” as we ride on the waves of technological advancements for the advancements of our intelligence.

  31. Well to start off both articles were LONG but very interesting and informative. Carr and Cascio both present the ideas which are relevant to todays world, but I find myself siding with Carr more. Carr presented ideas where I found myself agreeing with him much more, and hell I was even doing some of the things he was talking about while I was reading his own article. I did not read a lot when I was little, but I did read more the the average kid, and I considered myself to be a better reader than most. Since my access to the internet, my reading ok books as not only gone down, it has completely disapeared. Between everything I do in my life I really do not have time to be reading full books any more and it truly is a shame. Because of this how and why I read has drastically changed. Like Carr says about himself, I find that my ability to sit over long periods of time and read is now very difficult, and if I had to read a book I believe that I would read it how I read articles for school and such. In my readings today I am searching for answers, facts, and opinions, all that either matter in school, or matter to me. Before I would read to see where my imagination took me and that has completely come out of my reading. All creativity from it and even sometimes enjoyment (most of the time) is nonexistent. Carr is right that the Net has changed how we read and do other things today, and I have experienced it which is why I lean towards him.

    The fact that these articles were written 5+ years ago does matter, because even in that short time so much has changed. Even things that were around back then like Facebook and Twitter have changed so much. The Net is a constantly evolving thing that is going to adapt pretty much for as long as it exists. It is never going to stay the same because there is so much you can do on this Net and so many people use it, people are always going to be looking for ways to change and even improve it. I would be interested to see what my use of the internet was like when these articles were written compared to now.

  32. After reading both articles and understanding both arguments of the implication of the internet I think that I favor Nicolas Carr more but not necessarily for the exact same reasons. I would agree with Carr from the aspect that it is the type of media that is used to translate information, and that there is a kinesthetic connection between actual text book and some characters on a screen. Although that may be true of the connection between screen and tangible material, I think there is an argument that is missing between both Carr and Cascio. Taking from personal experience I thing that there isn’t really an altering connection of media, none of the authors touch in the fact of the difficulty of find something. The internet is a giant resource, an massive and amended encyclopedia that is updated and changed all the time, and both authors touch on it a little bit with the point that there is an abundant amount of information that can accessed at any point and with ease. Both fail to acknowledge the idea of difficulty, and the amount of time that is needed to retain information. We all have these ticks and tendencies and no matter what kind of media the information is presented on, it the individual has to work to find the information, it will be remembered and therefore become valuable. The great thing about the internet is speed, and the ability to look up anything at one time in seconds. The idea with looking information up in the book it that it is time consuming, boring, and long, and because of that you remember the information better because you know that the second you close that book and walk away there is gonna be effort needed to find that piece of evidence again, where as the internet as Cascio discusses allows us to fill out minds with information at ridiculous fast speeds. The part I agree with Carr the most on however is the fact that the internet isn’t necessarily makings stupider, its just making us not value information as much because we are able to accesses these concepts at any point. We don’t as a society value information anymore, and we take for granted the knowledge beach we know that we can just refer to the internet as our data base because we don’t have the need to store it or remember it. The idea of retaining information better because of the media, for example the computer screen verse a textbook is completely false and doesn’t matter, because as humans we are a species that learns to adapt, thats how we have been able to survive for this long, and I would completely agree with Cascio that we will evolve with the times and we will adapt to the change of how information is now communicated. However, that said, I don’t agree with the idea that we will get smarted because of it, but we would get lazier because of it, and we know that we have that database that acts as an extension of our own brains today. In terms of the time period of which they wrote this, I don’t think that they are out of date, and i think that they are right on with their arguments, but I think they are a little misguided and are missing the hard working aspect of it and the value and process of looking something up, rather than just googling it or using the internet. Informations is the key to knowledge, not doubt; but how we remember that knowledge is even more valuable, and what is true about all smart and intelligent people, is that they are hardworking, in all aspects of their lives and it isn’t about what the form of information is, but how its found, and the work that is used to find it and through that hard work the knowledge is valued and will be remembered longer, and that is the key to intelligence.

  33. I agree with parts of each argument. Carr brings up a point that I can relate with. He talks about how he finds it difficult to keep focus while reading any piece of work. He said that he loses concentration after a couple pages and then finds himself wanting to look at something else instead. This happens with me a lot, especially with readings that I have to complete for class. I’ll even be reading and then forget what I just read at the end of the page. I found that it is a little easier to read when I put my phone out of reach from me.
    I think Google is actually opening up more resources to learn more and more information. Google, as well as the internet in general, has allowed people to learn things immediately. There is no need to go to the library to look up information for an essay anymore (unless your teacher requires it). All I have to do is find reputable sources online. I almost always use Google to search up my sources.
    As far as Cascio’s article goes, he brings up an interesting point when he talks about using modafinil. He talks about how he takes it to help him with jetlag after business trips. However, talks about how people are using it to get ahead of others, to be more competitive. I also found it interesting how he said, “From the perspective of those who find that they’re much more productive using this form of enhancement, it’s no more cheating than getting a faster computer or a better education”. It is kind of scary to think about more and more people using modafinil on a daily basis. If it is habit forming or addictive, they will not want to go without taking it because they feel like they are more and more productive with it.